A poem for Monday:
Writing a headline
is like creating Haiku.
It must work - and fit.
Among the hardest jobs at the paper is writing headlines. There’s limited space, both in the number of words available and the width of the columns. Think about it this way. It’s easy to get Bush into a one-column lead headline. Washington would be another matter. And then of course is the real test, balancing truth and seduction. Good headlines inform, attract and entertain. Puns are good when they work. When they don’t, a bad pun headline is like the guest at your party who never leaves.
The Panthers’ loss to the Seahawks yesterday gave a chance for headline writers to strut their stuff. Here are how three newspapers headlined the story, at least in their printed editions.
Winston-Salem Journal: ‘Helpless in Seattle’. Pretty good. Almost as inspired as our infamous DANG headline of two years ago, when the Cats lost in the Super Bowl.
News & Record: West Toast. A little obscure to pick up on the pun, but big and bold and I applaud it. Newspapers don’t use toast in the non-breakfast sense nearly enough.
Charlotte Observer: Seattle Reigns. Dignified. And maybe I’m reading too much into it, but my sense is that head subtly implies that the Panthers didn’t lose so much as Seattle won.
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